This is an introductory paragraph to an essay of compare/contrast. There are 2 major errors
This is an introductory paragraph to an essay of compare/contrast. There are 2 major errors occurring. What are they?
Ever since I was young I have always had a fascination with animals of all kinds. I was fortunate enough to live by a river and a field. By the river I could watch the ducks float around, watch the fish swim, once in a while see a turtle, and once I even saw a crane in the water, which to me is an exotic bird. In the field hundreds of rabbits run around along with chipmunks, birds of every color would fly around; you might even see a falcon or a hawk, which is rare for the city. At night time it was like a shift change. You will find deer, raccoons, opossums, and if you are lucky, you may catch sight of a fox romping around.
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