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There are many positive impacts of tourism such as, Tourism creates employment, Tourism attracts foreign investors, Tourism increases the national income and Tourism improves the country’s infrastructures.First, Tourism creates employment (Berkeley, 2007) notes “Tourism creates employment especially for business sector and travel industry which provide services to visitors”. For example, there are many hotels, restaurants and airports improve so there will be many jobs for local people like tour guide, flight attendants, waiters, tour operations and pilots.Second, Tourism attracts foreign investors (Parker, 2014) notes “Tourism attracts foreign investors who have found interest in starting anew business in that country”. For instance, many visitors of the country enjoy the place so, they open new agencies, shopping malls, restaurants like Lulu spore market.Third, Tourism increase the national income. (Oman Times, 2010).”Tourism increases the national income faxes and visas paid by the tourist” More words, many tourists visit destination and paid for the services the at offer on the destination. So, whenever the number of tourists increase, the more the states income.Last, Tourist improves the country’s infrastructures. (Branch, 2014, pp2-4).” Tourist improves the country’s infrastructures Such as transportation and public facilities “If the number of tourists increase and paid more money for the more, the country in fractures will improve and increase like transportation, public toilet and hotels.In Conclusion, There are four positive impacts of tourism such as, (Tourism creates employment, Tourism attracts foreign investors, Tourism increases the national income and Tourism improves the country’s infrastructures). Since the number of tourist increase so the country will improve in all aspects of.
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