which sentence is best?
Oriented to Self Care, SWC is an Educational Web Site Dedicated to Promoting Natural Health For Humans and Their Animals
Oriented to Self Care, SWC is an Educational Web Site Dedicated to Promote Natural Health For Humans and Their Animals
Promoting or Promote ?
I think you have at least a couple of options:
- "promoting," not "promote"--Oriented to self-care, SWC is an educational Web site dedicated to promoting natural health for humans and their animals. (Also avoid all the capital letters, which are not needed.)
- "that," not "which"--"SWC is an educational website that promotes natural health for humans and their animals." ("which" clauses introduce extra information and should be preceded by a comma.)
|link comment||answered Jul 07 '13 at 20:24 Dr. G Contributor|
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