seperation of sentences
are my sentences correct
We are parents of Jayabharathy Gobichettipalayam Nageswaran(hereafter mentioned as Bharathy)born on September 09 1978, residing at 1804 Merry wood drive, Edison, NJ.
You need commas before born and after 09. If the street is Merry Wood, the w in wood should be capitalized, as should the d in Drive. If the street name is Merrywood, eliminate the space between Merry and wood. Place a space before and after the parentheses. In your title, correct "seperation" to separation. And I would say "We are the parents of...", rather than, "We are parents of.....".
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