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This sentence does not seem to flow how Id like it to... any suggestions?

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Since the late 1970's, which brought the invention of the VHS and resulting spread of readily available pornography, censorship vs. free speech has often been a passionately debated topic among parents, teachers, fundamentalist Christians and literary artists.
asked Jun 28 '13 at 00:23 Lindsay Barnard New member

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I never suggest adding more words to fix a long sentence. Less is more, edit.

 

Since the invention of VHS, resulting in readily available pornography, censorship vs. free speech has been a passionately debated topic among parents, teachers, fundamentalist Christians, and literary artists.

link comment answered Jun 28 '13 at 08:49 Tony Proano Expert

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