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How do I fix this for a resume:Performed a Practicum in Academic Libraries supervised by Erin O’Toole-(Biology Liaison and Science Reference Librarian, at the Eagle Commons Library) at the University Of North Texas.

asked Jun 26 '13 at 19:21 chermonique New member

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How this looks or is changed depends a lot on the format you have chosen for your resume. 

Here are my recommendations:


Completed a Practicum in Academic Libraries at the University Of North Texas, supervised by Erin O’Toole (Biology Liaison and Science Reference Librarian, Eagle Commons Library)  

link comment answered Jun 27 '13 at 13:30 Kimberly Expert

a far cry from previous years

link comment answered Feb 05 '14 at 04:41 Amy Han New member

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