how do I fix this sentence?
Not just as those things they can also teach them how to become a man or women and be a father or mother to their kids when that time comes.
If they're teaching "them," then they need plural nouns as well as better parallelism: As well as those things, they can also teach them how to become men or women and fathers or mothers to their children with the time comes. (If this is a formal paper, kids should only be used for baby goats.)
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