Modal verbs and length

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How can this sentence be less wordy yet still retain the idea.

"The increased speed of scientific and technological development" (Rabinovich & Morton, 2012, p. 992), advancements in communications (Franzen, 2012; Franzen, Weingart, & Rödder, 2012), and the increasing pace of peer-reviewed publications may leave the general public may feeling "along for the ride" (Grotzer et al., 2012, p. 27).

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"The increased speed of scientific and technological development" ), advancements in communications ), and the increasing pace of peer-reviewed publications may leave the general public may feeling "along for the ride" .
asked Jun 01 '13 at 21:29 Asi Bumaga New member

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