To wordy "my goal" paragraph


I give up. I've been trying to fix these few sentencses and am not understanding what you want me to change. Can you read what I have and make a suggestion that works? I have tanother paper to write and edit before 7 a.m.

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My expectation for this paper is for the reader to come away with a clearer understanding of the some basic historical data and have included some of the key events in our history I feel illustrates how homelessness evolved in America.
asked May 22 '13 at 07:04 Ellen Miller New member

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