persuasion essay


confusing modifier, how can I reword this

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Children between the ages of six to 11 are described as school age; this age group is already thinking in concrete terms they are able to plan their actions and receive an outcome that they want .
asked May 19 '13 at 20:20 Gabbrielle Lewis New member

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