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I am evaluating the symbolism of Franz Kafka essay, can you help me?

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He, the man, become childish and, since in the long years studying the gatekeeper, has also come to know the fleas, in his fur collar, he even ask the fleas, to help him persuade the gatekeeper".
asked May 17 '13 at 01:53 Michael Anguelo New member

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The man becomes childish and in the long years of studying the gatekeeper has come to know the fleas in the gatekeeper's fur collar. The man even asks the fleas to help persuade the gatekeeper.

You have too many commas and a run-on sentence.

link comment answered Jun 08 '13 at 03:12 Charlotte New member

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