is there a way to make this better?????

See example:

This is a science-fiction book; this book take the reader into a whole new dimension with numerous events to think of.
asked May 16 '13 at 23:07 Vaishu Meda New member

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The sentence is a little sharp. Starting off saying "This is a science-fiction book" will bore your audience.

Another an better way to state your sentence could be like this.

"As the reader, you will be taken into a whole new dimension, that will give you several events to unravel while reading your science-fiction book."

link comment answered May 17 '13 at 15:35 brandon helling New member

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