how should this be written to that there is no confusion between "to" and "two"

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She is not thinking of the moment when a male monarch turned, and bowing regally in the wind invited her to spin in midair, like two ballet dancers defying gravity.

grammarly - tells me to use the word "to" instead of "two"

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She is not thinking of the moment when a male monarch turned, and bowing regally in the wind invited her to spin in midair, like two ballet dancers defying gravity.
asked May 02 '13 at 12:41 Ron Starbuck New member

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