check the grammar
i want to say the sunshine is strong
The sun trout out its splendid and baked the ground heavily.
Your sentence is close to being all right -- you just need to change a couple of things:
- "Trout" isn't the word you want. I'm not sure which word you're trying to say. "Trotted," maybe? That doesn't quite fit, either. The idiom "trot out" feels weak for something as powerful as the sun.
- "Splendid" is the adjective form; you want the noun form: "splendor."
- Using "heavily" here is correct grammar, but it doesn't quite match your metaphor of baking the ground. Maybe "mightily" would fit better?
Here's an edit:
The sun revealed its splendor and baked the ground mightily.
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