Which would be correct

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I am wanting to know which way this sentence would be correctly punctuated.

 

 

He covered his eyes with both hands waiting for the first slam to hit his body - for teeth to start ripping flesh from his bones - for his own blood to paint the walls - but it never happened.

 

 

Would it be better with commas, rather than the dash?

commas and dashes asked Apr 25 '13 at 05:25 lee leeeder New member

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