A Different Point of View
After a recent school test, a young male student came up with a different type of essay that amazed me. For most of his sentences or paragraphs, he would start with the personal pronoun "You are..." or anything like so.
"You know them to be the signs of your self-mutilation".
"You no longer care. All that matters now is feeding refuse and fuel to the fire that keeps you going; that gives colour and meaning to your life."
My teacher said that such writing style is recommended as well.
All I saw was a piece of paper riddled with nothing but ticks.
I found the essay very interesting and wish to follow suit with the next story I would like to start on.
Shockingly, I found out that Grammarly did not support this style of writing, or so I presumed. When I typed "You are walking towards a silver-coloured motorized vehicle.", an error regarding my writing style was mentioned. However, when I changed it to "David is walking towards a silver-coloured motorized vehicle.", it gave a perfect 100%.
I would like to ask: are these kinds of writing styles not supported?
I find the essay flawless because it sounds right to me, but I need an expert's opinion on this.
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