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A brilliant military man, Joshua commanded the officers to prepare for battle, and in three days they would set out to conquer the land God had given them.  Then he sent 2 spies to scout out the land, especially Jericho.

 

 

NOTE: I mean for this to say that after Joshua commanded the officers to prepare for battle, he then sent 2 spies to scout out the land.  The way I have it (above), does it look like he sent the spies out after 3 days?  Thank you!

asked Apr 02 '13 at 23:04 Susan New member

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