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In addition to this, CDC "recommends tax and price increases and mass media campaigns to reduce the number the number of youth who start smoking and to promote cessation and telephone quit line support, as well as a number of health care system interventions, also to increase cessation" .
asked Apr 02 '13 at 04:47 Pamela Taguines New member

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