Effective Writing

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Rewrite the following sentence using the principles of effective writing
You have not yet informed me.

asked Mar 25 '13 at 16:07 Sourav New member

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You have not yet informed me.

Answer me by (noon|tonight|tomorrow) or else I'll string you up by your toes.

 

I claim this to be way more effective, because it is a call to action reinforced with a vivid image of  corporal punishment. ;)

link comment edited Mar 31 '13 at 22:41 David Simons New member

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