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There is no freedom for the student in the class like the U.S. For example, American students pay attention to their teacher and can do anything they want.
asked Jun 27 '11 at 03:25 Vanza Bik New member

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Students *generally* do not enjoy the same freedom that students in the US / that their American counterparts do. American students, for example, can pay attention to their teachers while doing / engaging in other activities.

link comment answered Jun 27 '11 at 14:32 Gabedude Contributor

i am shubham rastogi. i belongs to killa parikshit garh it is near by meerut. i have done my schooling from there . i have done bba from IIMT  in my graduation. i want to make my carrer in corporate world and be a profational person. so i  join the graphic era university for frther eduction  for fullfill my dream. my hobbies are to learn listening to music and playing vedio games. 

about my strenth i am straben in nature.

objective of my life is "To strive for the continous development of myself by keeping pace with the latest emerging trends of the corporate world.

Motto of my life is "Himmate madat Maadate khuda". It is always used my means one who is initiator of any task and doesn't afraid from its result that person is helped by God itself.


link comment answered Sep 09 '11 at 18:45 shubhamrastogi New member

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