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Thinking about it now maybe a more appropriate title could have been something along the lines of the following: Bullet Points of American History, American History: The Cliff Notes Version, or even American History: A View of What is Really Important from the Federal Government and the Publisher's Perspective.

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Thinking about it now maybe a more appropriate title could have been something along the lines of the following: Bullet Points of American History, American History: The Cliff Notes Version, or even American History: A View of What is Really Important from the Federal Government's and the Publisher's Perspective.
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