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"Facilities that have implemented safe patient-handling procedures have demonstrated that their initial investment in lift equipment is off-set in just a few years by the reduced cost of worker's compensation payments and savings from fewer lost workdays." The hospital where I work does not have 'Magnet status,' and from time to time nurses lose income due to bodily injury due to lifting and do it yourself when short staffed Only a small portion such as the Critical care units and the Progressive care Unit have such equipment, also electronic blood pressure machine, some beds that are ergonomic and bar code scanner for when monitoring the blood sugar levels to assist the nurses with doing the job more efficiently.
asked Feb 24 '13 at 23:11 henrietta bartholomew New member

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