Grammarly says, "Review for pronoun use"
Hannah lived in the day when the judges ruled in Israel, a time when everyone did as they saw fit.
The Grammarly software also seems to pick up situations where the pronoun's antecedent does not clearly relate to the sentence subject. In this case, everyone cannot refer to Hannah. So the software flags it and asks you to make sure the context makes it clear who "everyone" refers to.
I hope this helps.
|link comment||answered Feb 25 '13 at 01:03 Jeff Pribyl Grammarly Fellow|
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