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What should I use instead of 'is related'?

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Education is related to better patient outcomes and is particularly essential for the optimal care of dying patients (Gill & Duffy, 2010; Lansdell, & Beech, 2010; Law, 2009; Smith, & Porock, 2009; Whitehead, at el., 2010).
asked Jun 13 '11 at 00:28 laura cox New member

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"Better patient outcomes result from education and are particularly essential..."

link comment answered Jun 13 '11 at 03:45 Stacie New member

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