Can dashes be used correctly in place of commas to show action in your sentences?


eg:  The dragon beat his wings, clouds of dust flying up, the elves ducking for cover as he lifted from the ground.


or should I be rewriting this sentence in a different way to show the action happening?

dashes commas edited Feb 19 '13 at 23:08 Lee New member

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