I keep being told by the grammar checker that this is a fragments sentence but I can't see why....



Nee pricked up his ears as the sphere went bouncing overhead, the sound now growing in intensity. 


I'm no expert but would appreciate a little advice on what I am doing wrong and whether fragmented sentences are acceptable.

Fragmented sentences edited Feb 20 '13 at 01:40 Lee New member

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