Confusing modifiers

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Hello all,

I'm new here and this is my first time venturing in, so thanks for your help.  I have a sentence that has beaten me and would be grateful for some suggestions. 

 

People lean out of their car windows to look at Baillie - partly because of that wonderful sense of joy that Springers have, as well as the fact that she truly is a beautiful dog!

 

To put it in context, the work is an article about Springer Spaniels and the sentence is immediately preceded by     She literally stops traffic when we go walking.

 

many thanks for your advice.  I've reworked it in so many ways and still come up with errors. 

cheers, Jane

grammar asked Feb 15 '13 at 21:45 Jane B New member

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