Pronoun agreement

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The preceeding sentences talk about plural diseases. I want the sentence in the example to be the ending thought for these statements but Grammarly sees this as pronoun disagreement within the single sentence structure. Here is the complete paragraph.

Women with PCOS, especially those who are struggling with weight gain or obesity, are at a higher risk for other more serious health related issues, such as type two diabetes due to the over-productive pancreas and increased insulin levels. In addition, it can lead to cardiovascular disease, high blood pressure, uterine cancer, sleep apnea, and depression. Early diagnosis and intervention is the key to preventing these life threatening diseases.

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Early diagnosis and intervention is the key to preventing these life threatening diseases.
asked Feb 10 '13 at 16:56 Elizabeth Connors New member

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