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1-Punctuation within a sentence.

2-Writing style.

3- Vocabulary use.

4-Wordiness.

 

 

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My favorite fruit is apple, it's my favorite because it's very delicious, and healthy and sweet, I always eat an apple for breakfast, my dad also loves apples, actually most of my family members eat apples.

I don't eat apples that aren't fresh.

help Me please english asked Feb 10 '13 at 12:44 Jessi Jessi New member

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