Help with a sentence structure!

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I edited this sentence many times, but I always get a "sentence structure" alert. How can I improve the following sentence?!!!!

 

"For instance, if all patients get exactly the same amount of attention and care by the doctor, some patients may feel uneasy and uncomfortable, especially if they receive  good friendly treatments from previous doctors."

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"For instance, if all patients get exactly the same amount of attention and care by the doctors, some patients may feel ill at ease, especially if they receive  good treatments from the previous doctors."

link comment answered Feb 10 '13 at 04:11 sanjay Expert

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