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Today we went to the aquarium to look at the marine life. In the tanks, were many types of fishes and mammals. The man was feeding Macho sharks by hand, James had a chance to feed the deers and May swam with the dolphins in the 2:30 show. She was wet from head to toe the rest of the day.
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