How to prove this sentences

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Hi,

Could you help me how to shortten this sentence, and make it more clear.

See example:

After getting more profits because of globalization, companies could open up markets and get greater efficiency in the industry and advancing technologies .
asked Feb 02 '13 at 05:17 XIZI LIU New member

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