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I for one do not ever want to make the living or dying choice for no patient or family member because I know personally how hard that choice truly is and I would encourage the one who has to make the decision to seek God in prayer and let God's will be done.
asked Feb 01 '13 at 02:07 Audra Johnson New member

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