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Ethics on the other hand are reflected actions that a professional should take when resolving an ethical issue and usually coded, for example, American Nursing Association Code of Ethics for Nurses .
asked Jan 25 '13 at 23:28 Audra Johnson New member

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link comment answered Jun 02 '13 at 15:52 Tammy New member

I'm working on an abstract. One very long sentence without periods. I am have trouble with comma's and semi-colon's and the like...could someone help me work on the following sentence please


Phillips in “Frankenpolitics,” continues his argument on the mode of production by revealing what is not the problem; “underproduction is not the problem, but rather, the lack of egalitarian distribution; Lee further implicates, society’s “over-reliance on certain products doesn’t come from genetic modification, but rather the  “economics of the modern farming system,” thus, Phillips unfavorable stance on organic foods not offering additional nutrition.   

link comment answered Dec 09 '16 at 01:40 Trinay Caudle New member

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