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how to correct sentence
If an individual loves another,than he or she would receives encouragement to enter into a formal marriage, gets the ful benefits from the community and society.
You need a rewrite. See if this works: When individuals love one another, they should be encouraged to enter into a formal marriage to get the full benefits provided by society and the community. I'm not sure you need both "society" and "and the community" because society encompasses the community.
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