Please let me know if this sentence is written correctly? Thank you.
One difficult situation in which I remembered that at first seems difficult for me to accept was the transition of my career life and moving back home with my parents.
I would revise that sentence slightly; it's a bit confusing. Here's what I would do:
One difficult situation I remember, which at first was difficult for me to accept, was the transition of my career life and the subsequent move back home with my parents.
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