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Please let me know if this sentence is written correctly? Thank you.

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One difficult situation in which I remembered that at first seems difficult for me to accept was the transition of my career life and moving back home with my parents.
asked Jan 09 '13 at 22:43 Hope New member

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I would revise that sentence slightly; it's a bit confusing. Here's what I would do:

 

One difficult situation I remember, which at first was difficult for me to accept, was the transition of my career life and the subsequent move back home with my parents.

link answered Jan 09 '13 at 22:55 Michelle Webb Contributor

Thank you for your help. Hope

HopeJan 10 '13 at 01:25

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