What's the best way to fix this sentence?
This tale may be nearer in tone to the old Shadow radio serials than to more recent comics.
I don't think you need to change anything. I like it! Since "The Shadow" is the name of the radio show, though, it should be in quotes.
If you wanted to simplify a little (and assuming you've already introduced the tale in the previous sentence), you could say:
Its tone may be closer to the old "Shadow" radio serials than to more recent comics.
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