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Moreover, Mrs. Johnson feels like "Dee is lighter then Maggie, with nicer hair and a fuller figure" ), because as Dee is educated and living in the big city, she can easily afford for the new style of living in order to forget her African American origin and to hide her origin, she had changed her name to Wangero Leewanika Kemanjo, where as otherhand Maggie, living in countryside, an uneducated, has limited herself to the house helping her mother.
asked May 24 '11 at 23:54 bhavik New member

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