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"The fact that the woman's husband could not stand up to see her position is quite ironical considering he acted so coldly in deciding to her treatment."

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The fact that the woman's husband could not stand up to see her position is quite ironical considering he acted so coldly in deciding to her treatment.
asked May 22 '11 at 01:08 April Wallace New member

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The man opened the door and fainted when he first saw her.  But he could not tell what she was actually doing. Because he fainted he could not stand up and see her.

link comment answered May 24 '11 at 02:19 April Wallace New member

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