Faulty parallelism


Can anyone help me understand what is wrong with this sentence and how I can make it any clearer?

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As an Industrial Designer I look forward to not only solving functionality problems but also challenging and stretching the limits of my creativity, and as a poet and writer, I anticipate creating comprehendible beauty in the things I write and fully expressing and sharing the things most important to me.
asked Dec 22 '12 at 16:18 Zoe Ene New member

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