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Having spent five years as a teaching assistant at Carleton University I have acquired valuable experience in lecturing, managing, counselling, tutoring and assessing the work of undergraduate students. In addition to the various introductory level courses in the area of political theory my workload has also covered a wide range of more advance topics related to the political and intellectual history of the western world. As reflected through my studies at the graduate level, my scholastic training is broad and encompasses a number of the various areas that fall under the heading of political philosophy. My master’s thesis examined the details of Alexandre Kojeve’s political thought and explored his account of the historical dialectic elaborated by Hegel and, to some degree, Marx. My doctoral dissertation compared Plato’s classical analysis of the origins of political order/disorder with the Christian analysis offered by Fyodor M. Dostoevsky. Working on such a diverse group of thinkers and themes has provided me with the opportunity to draw connections between the political philosophies of different historical periods and to convey elaborate thoughts clearly to an audience of student and/or academics. 

asked Feb 01 '11 at 22:35 John yzerman New member

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In addition to the various introductory level courses in the area of political theory my workload has also covered a wide range of more advance topics related to the political and intellectual history of the western world. 

This sentence is too long, put a comma between theory and my

link comment answered Feb 01 '11 at 23:32 Noel Jones New member

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