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grammly said this sentence is too wordy, do you agree? help me.

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A prime example of this type of ads is Success cologne advertisement by Donald Trump.
asked Dec 06 '12 at 04:53 sam New member

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I don't think it's wordy. Change 'ads' to 'ad' and add 'the' before 'Success'.

 

A prime example of this type of ad is the Success cologne advertisement by Donald Trump.

link comment answered Dec 06 '12 at 11:28 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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