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I am a cartoonist and now writing children's books

asked Jan 31 '11 at 14:39 Noel Jones New member

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Noel, 

 

You have two complete thoughts in one sentence.  It is better to include a subject with the second complete thought and use a comma before the 'and'.  

"I am a cartoonist, and I am now writing children's books."

link comment answered Jan 31 '11 at 14:44 Kimberly Expert
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I am a cartoonist and a writer for children's books.

link comment answered Feb 11 '11 at 04:53 Wenda Allison Guerra New member
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could you speak a bit up,please?

link comment answered Jul 07 '11 at 20:20 mariela New member

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