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Just like Egyptian and Native American cutlers, Mayans believe that dreams and religion are correlated and connect them to their gods and past ancestors; while giving insight into the future and what is to come to them and their families.
asked Nov 29 '12 at 15:10 Wilganowskis New member

What do you mean by "cutlers"?

DavidNov 29 '12 at 16:29

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The ending is redundant.  You could say

 

"Just like Egyptian and Native American cutlers, Mayans believe that dreams and religion are correlated and connect the people to their gods and ancestors, while giving them insight into what the future holds for them and their families."

 

Do you want "believe" in the present or past tense?  I still don't know what "cutlers" refers to here.

link comment answered Nov 29 '12 at 18:42 David Contributor

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