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what is the right verb to use?

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WHAT ARE THE FACTORS THAT INFLUENCE AFRICAN WOMEN IN PURCHASING SKIN LIGTENING PRODUCTS?
asked Nov 28 '12 at 22:54 aisha New member

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Hi Aisha.  If you mean the verb "influence," I think that is fine.  However, you should do something about "in purchasing," since it is not clear grammatically that it is the women who are doing the purchasing.  You might say:

 

"What are the factors that influence African American women in their purchase of skin-lightening products?"

link comment answered Nov 29 '12 at 14:57 David Contributor

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