confusing modifiers

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I am not sure how to correct this sentence.

See example:

By providing control of the local population, the rebels had no place to hide among the locals.
asked Nov 27 '12 at 19:08 osman sesay New member

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"By controlling the local population, the authorities left the rebels with no place to hide."

 

This way, it's clear who is controlling the population, and you avoid the redundant use of "local/locals." Sometimes solutions are just a matter of adding a bit more explanation, a few more words to clarify what you mean.

link comment answered Nov 27 '12 at 19:22 David Contributor

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