incorrect use of prepositions

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how can this sentence be used correctly.

See example:

This department enables workers to get work done accurately because they are separated into departments they specialize in.
asked May 10 '11 at 09:57 david kwon New member

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David, 

 

The sentence looks more or less correct, but I think your word choice is a little awkward.

 

This department enables workers to get work done effectively because they are separated according to the fields they specialize in.

 

1) 'accurately' means something more like 'precisely' or 'with attention to detail' rather than 'correctly' or 'well', which is what I think you wanted to say.

 

2) It sounds strange to say the departments within the department.  I've inferred your meaning and suggested what I think sounds most clear.

 

 

link comment answered May 11 '11 at 11:58 Kimberly Expert

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