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The Management would like to inform that with effect from 09 May 2011 till 22 June 2011, we have revised the above as stated below:-

asked May 09 '11 at 10:50 maya kumari New member

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The management would like to inform everyone that they have revised the above text (document/table). The revised text is as follows and will be in effect from 09 May 2011 until 22 June 2011: 

 

You needed an object (everyone) and, for clarity, changing the sentence to two sentences is helpful.

link comment edited May 11 '11 at 12:38 Kimberly Expert

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