Yes we all have a dream and we all working towards a common gold to achieve our degree.
Yes we all have a dream and we all working towards a common gold to achieve our degree.
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Yes we all have a dream and we all working towards a common gold to achieve our degree.
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This is a compound sentence and you need a comma before 'and'. There are some punctuation errors, also.
'Gold' is a metal; you want to use 'goal'. You need to put a comma after goal, because the rest of the sentence is an appositive.
Yes, we all have a dream, and we are all working towards a common goal, to achieve our degree.
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answered Nov 25 '12 at 02:27
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