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In 1972 it was founded by a group of seven Catholics and seven Protestants who believed that, “Christians across the country could be mobilized to influence national policy on matters that were so vitally important to hungry people and develop public support for better policies” ( ).
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In 1972 it was founded by a group of seven Catholics and seven Protestants who believed that, "Christians across the country could be mobilized to influence national policy on matters that were so vitally important to hungry people and develop public support for better policies" .
asked May 07 '11 at 18:51
Annise Hawkins
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Annise Hawkins
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In 1972 (write the name here) was formed by 7 Catholics and 7 Protestants who believed that – laura cox – 1 day ago
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answered May 09 '11 at 18:13
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In 1972 (write the name here) was formed by 7 Catholics and 7 Protestants who believed that – laura cox – May 08 '11 at 03:32
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